That Day.

I look out the window,

I look out and smile,

I see the spot,

Where I made you mine.

It was a rainy day,

And under that tree,

You were standing there,

Standing with me.

I wanted to say,

Say, that I love you,

And I wanted you to,

Say you love me too.

And in the moment,

That moment with you,

My heart gives in,

And I tell you I do.

I take your hand,

In both of mine,

I look at you,

and can't help but smile.

You were so timid,

Timid, indeed.

You shyly smile,

And look at me.

You tell me then,

You finally do,

That you did in fact,

Love me too.

Reviews

[Sunil Nayak]

:) nice and simple!! too good

[Sonad]

Wow !!! i Loved this ! Amazing!

[Khaaki]

thats very sweet neatly done...tc

[Helena]

Beautiful poem. Sweet, pure and innocent pledging their love to one another. Well done! Thank you for submitting this to my Valentine's contest! ~ Helena

[Eric Cox]

Very romantic. A beautiful love poem. Nicely done.

[Wicahpi]

Sweet!
Good Luck in the Poetry of Love contest!

[Aditya Unni]

Sigh, nice!~