Counting on.

I'm counting on,

I'm counting days.

Since I last saw you,

Since we parted ways.

I'm praying for you,

To see you smile,

To feel your touch

Come back, be mine.

I feel the tears,

Trickle down,

I want you here,

I want you now.

It's hard enough,

To live each day,

Knowing that you left,

For far away.

I cannot survive,

With you gone,

No I can't,

It's been too long.

I'm holding fast,

Holding on,

For you, my dear,

I will be strong.

I'm counting on,

I'm counting days.

When I will see you,

See you again.

Reviews

[Khaaki]

so beautiful... keep it up deeksha

[Wicahpi]

This poem shows the longing of love gone away.
It's hard to be without one you love.
Thank you for your entries into my Poetry of Love contest!
Good Luck

[ASMIDEEP]

Very nice ...very romantic...

[Jessica]

ahh, the loss of love is a great topic for a poem, good emotion

[Destinee]

love the flow of the words and emotions throughout the poem. great job!

[Aditya Unni]

I'm counting on,
I'm counting days.
Since I last saw you,
Since we parted ways.
Inferiority complex hit me hard :(