Alone

Alone

A Poem by dina[saur]
"

being alone sometimes is better then having the wrong person by yourside

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when i am alone, i set my mind free
i open my eyes to the world
i let my heart sing

when i am alone, i imagine
imagine the world at peace
imagine my life differently

when i am alone, i dream
dream of another world
dream of starting anew

when i am with you
everything crashes
everything falls apart 


© 2010 dina[saur]



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Great poem! I didn't see that ending coming though . Awesome, well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


People doubt everyone, looking past it is key. I did enjoy this poem. :]

Posted 7 Years Ago


i feel the same way.... i just got out of an abusive relationship...... i agree with you

Posted 7 Years Ago


quite true, some people just don't connect. sometimes being alone just helps to free the mind of the reality of the world, and releases your soul into deeper parts of yourself. i enjoyed the surprising contrast at the end; i enjoyed also how the first line of each set stanza. keep p the good work. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on January 27, 2010
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dina[saur]
dina[saur]

leesburg, VA



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the name is dina! i haven't been into writing that much but this past year, ive been through a lot and the best way i found to vent out what i feel is to write things out! im a happy go lucky girl tha.. more..

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