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Sincerely Your's 3

Sincerely Your's 3

A Story by babygirl_broken...
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another poem to your ex

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At first you were the most amazing thing that happened to me. But boy was I wrong! You abbused me and hurt me in ways that can't be fixed. My life was like a living pit of death. You made me cry until the tears just wouldn't come anymore. The only joy I had when we were together was the daughter we shared. But now you've ruined her life too, now she has no daddy to pull her through all the pain and problems in life. Just her mother drenched in pain...
                     
                                                                                                                Sincerely,
                                                                                                            Your last lover

© 2017 babygirl_broken...



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tbh its very deep and i like deep things that i can connect with espically being abused but as a kid i think you should keep writing emotional an personally deep things like this but not to personal.overall amazing poem

Posted 5 Months Ago


This is again, a well typed poem, just a suggestion, try stanzas for a better effect.
Overall a good poem.
Keep writing.

Posted 5 Months Ago



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