Sincerely Yours 4

Sincerely Yours 4

A Story by babygirl_broken...

another poem to your ex

At first I was your queen but then you found another.. I had to work late one night I came home around 11:30 Y'all were asleep together in my bed. How could you do this to me I trusted you so much, you were my everything. You said I was your other half but then she came in and evidently made you whole. I'm just sorry I wasn't enough.

© 2017 babygirl_broken...

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Pain expressed powerfully and intensely. The "made you whole" phrase was the knockout punch in this piece. Clever phrase. Nice work.

Posted 10 Months Ago

I'm sorry this happened. Presenting it so simply and starkly really makes the pain of the situation that much more evident. I hope you'll be able to heal, and to find new happiness. It's good that you're able to express yourself with writing in the mean time, to let the feelings out in a healthy, constructive way. Good luck!

Posted 10 Months Ago

i can feel the pain, very nice

Posted 10 Months Ago

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