Abandoned chair

Abandoned chair

A Poem by dadist poetic

Oh abandoned chair
dragged like a corpse 
by two long weak arms
pulling you slowly 
on the scratched floor
untill your wooden limbs are full of scars

you're heavy tonight abandoned chair
are you keeping up with the long strides?
of two bendded legs
walking with a burdened pace
" is it pain or disgrace? "

Oh don't worry abandoned chair
we're almost there
hold on to those slippery fingers
lay your weight on that crooked back
take a nap abandoned chair
it's a long way home
"we're almost there"

Bam
abandoned chair falls

They left you halfway.
.
you'll never go home 




© 2013 dadist poetic



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Wow, I just felt like the chair was a great symbol anyways well done I mean the metaphors and similies of "dragged like a corpse" and the scenery you created was pretty good understanding that the atmosphere was dark and gloomy with "you'll never go home".

Posted 4 Years Ago


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dadist poetic

4 Years Ago

:))



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Makes me curious as to what the abandoned chair is representing. I like how it can become the readers perspective on the meaning and not necessarily just for the writer.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting poem. I like it when a poem I read makes me want to find out the story behind it. Very intriguing. Very much enjoyed it.
Cheers

Posted 4 Years Ago


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dadist poetic

4 Years Ago

oh thank you
OMG... chair is metaphor for abandonment, pain, depression maybe.. I found myself feeling sorry for the poor chair.. now thats something.. great work.. shallimarRose

Posted 4 Years Ago


dadist poetic

4 Years Ago

Thank youuuuuuu
Wow. Amazing symbolism... Beautifully written!! :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dadist poetic

4 Years Ago

:))
I like it :) good job

Posted 4 Years Ago


dadist poetic

4 Years Ago

Thankss
This is very interesting ... I like it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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dadist poetic

4 Years Ago

thanks
Roxii

4 Years Ago

Your welcome.
Wow, I just felt like the chair was a great symbol anyways well done I mean the metaphors and similies of "dragged like a corpse" and the scenery you created was pretty good understanding that the atmosphere was dark and gloomy with "you'll never go home".

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dadist poetic

4 Years Ago

:))
The deep sorrowful journey of an abandoned chair, as aptly told as I could imagine. You had me feeling compassion for the, "bendded and scared legs" and even the Bam! hit hard. It was a well written piece and a very enjoyable read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


dadist poetic

4 Years Ago

im glad you liked it
Very well done. The sadness of this piece is portrayed well within your words.

Posted 4 Years Ago


dadist poetic

4 Years Ago

Thanks
A sad poem. The chair made me think of people and places that once held precious memory to my heart and life. Last line is true. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


dadist poetic

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading :)

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