Maple Syrup

Maple Syrup

A Poem by Phillitup

Sticky
Smooth
Sap from a tree
Maple
Candy
From the eye can see
Yummy
Heritage
Tradition
O' Canada my country

© 2012 Phillitup



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OMG, I love this! lol =3

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

True patriot love :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


kublakhan27

5 Years Ago

LOL I saw the title and I knew right away what was up :D
Phillitup

5 Years Ago

:) Fellow canadians rock!
kublakhan27

5 Years Ago

:D
The fact that you said this had to do with your heritage is what made the poem, because it made it have meaning, which was the best part of it. :) Nice, this was cute.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
I like it! I don't exactly understand the line from the eye can see, though. Is it for the eye can see???

Posted 5 Years Ago


Phillitup

5 Years Ago

No. It's like...nevermind. It's complicated to explain.
angelface13

5 Years Ago

Can you explain???
Phillitup

5 Years Ago

IDK

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Added on October 21, 2012
Last Updated on November 11, 2012

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Phillitup
Phillitup

FL



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I am 14-years-old. I find inspiration all over the place: memories, ideas, things I notice. I like believing in things that others find impossible. I think that's the way I hope for a better future. .. more..

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