Statue

Statue

A Poem by Phillitup

Little
Statue
Porcelain
Hands
Upon
A
Music
Stand
Little
Statue
Precious
Turns
And
Winks
At
Me

© 2012 Phillitup


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Photos gave life to the amazing poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

:)
wow I would totally take that statue home with me if it winked at me..wondering if I did that would it talk?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Phillitup

11 Years Ago

:D
Jocie

11 Years Ago

lol..:)
I love this and the imagery. It kind of looks like a statue.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love this poem, very enchanting, with the choice of imagery you used, and the style format you chose to write this, wonderful write

Posted 11 Years Ago


but very good writen keep it up

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

thanks
Brookypoo

11 Years Ago

:D welcome
umm I'm pretty sure I would stab my self with a needle in the eye to see if I imagining that

Posted 11 Years Ago


Phillitup

11 Years Ago

:)
Brookypoo

11 Years Ago

;D
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Ees
Lovely!
reminds me of the things that my mother and grandmother kept about the windowsills when I was little. I could imagine whole worlds around those things. In particular my mother had this little cottage, set on the windowsill in the hall. I believe it was supposed to look like one from Ireland. There was a thatch roof on it and a little stone wall bordering the hill of a yard that it was set upon. I would stick my pinky finger through the gate into the yard and instantly become a part of that wee cottage scene. The life and the farm animals, I think I had to create, but sure, weren't the fairies there? There were crystals and elephants and tiny tea sets and silver figures and victorian shoe pincushions and other little houses. That is what this poem reminded me of!
A really charming little piece! Great job!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Phillitup

11 Years Ago

Thank you for your time and story! :)
Ees

11 Years Ago

No problem!
Great job writing! Thanks for making me think of those things.
very nicely done :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Phillitup

11 Years Ago

thanks
It is a gift to have imagination! Sometimes it can even become a reality (in a sense)... I could relate to this. I used to imagine dancing with the music box dancer when I was young. I wish I still could. Well, who knows?
Thank you for the wink.
Be well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Phillitup

11 Years Ago

Of course! Thank you!
whoa! this somehow reminded me of the statue of liberty, but this was a fun poem to read. I like yours, because there short but also paint a picture in your head. Like a glimpse of a bigger picture.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Phillitup

11 Years Ago

thank you very much!

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Phillitup

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I am 14-years-old. I find inspiration all over the place: memories, ideas, things I notice. I like believing in things that others find impossible. I think that's the way I hope for a better future. .. more..

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