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Is it Not

Is it Not

A Poem by Phillitup

Is it not the smile
that lights up the world?

The chill of fresh air
that makes that smile?

The morning dew
that forms the chill?

The silent night
that lays the dew to rest?

The etch of darkness
that makes up the night?

The pencil
that colors in the dark?

The poem
written by the pencil?

The reader
who smiles about the poem which lights up the world?

© 2012 Phillitup



Author's Note

Phillitup
I don;t know what brought this on.

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The picture this conveys in my mind: A valley, full of beautiful green grass with trees and mountains in the distance. Someone sits in that field bellow the light of the full moon, stars dotting the sky, lighting up the dew covered grass. That person begins to write their soul unto a piece of paper, and whatever is written, is written in a bright glow in the dark green glow, just bright enough to light the smile on that person's face.
very well done! ^^

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the image. When I write I always love to hear of readers who can see it in t.. read more
Bluefire

5 Years Ago

No problem! ^^



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The picture this conveys in my mind: A valley, full of beautiful green grass with trees and mountains in the distance. Someone sits in that field bellow the light of the full moon, stars dotting the sky, lighting up the dew covered grass. That person begins to write their soul unto a piece of paper, and whatever is written, is written in a bright glow in the dark green glow, just bright enough to light the smile on that person's face.
very well done! ^^

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

5 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the image. When I write I always love to hear of readers who can see it in t.. read more
Bluefire

5 Years Ago

No problem! ^^
You have a true gift dell


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

5 Years Ago

Thank you!

I appreciate that!
This is really pretty, and I like the message (: I feel like it could have a lot of hidden meanings.. Hmm. Anyways, great write, Dell (:

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

5 Years Ago

Thanks
how old are you again... oh thats right 13!!! thats crazy your a great writer... dont ever question your writing because its amazing! anyway nice write... yours truely
danielle (scripted)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

5 Years Ago

thanks
I agree with your thoughts in the poem. The goal of a writer is to create thoughts and send the reader to a better place. I like the flow of thoughts and the logical ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

5 Years Ago

Thank you
One for the road, the highway of dreams. I shall sleep well tonight. And that with a smile on my face! I don't know what brings it on but it is quite a pleasant and useful thing to be. Wondering, in my random sort of way, how the poem would read if it were written backward from its end to the beginning. Probably would have the same effect, but still a thought. Good night. I need to stop some time. Lol.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

5 Years Ago

Thanks
...I like the idea of the title being used as the pre-fix for each line...cool.:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


A little polishing and it would be a wondrous modern classic.

Cheers to your spirit.
- PeterB

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Whatever brought it on...it sounds just great and with a little bit of polish here n there, it can turn into a creative wonder. 100/100

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

no

Posted 5 Years Ago



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I am 14-years-old. I find inspiration all over the place: memories, ideas, things I notice. I like believing in things that others find impossible. I think that's the way I hope for a better future. .. more..

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