Exhausted

Exhausted

A Poem by Phillitup

Weary eyes
With a soul to match.
Heavy breathing
And the sigh of despair.
Done,
Through with the work.
Complete
Or not I am done.
No more
Work.
I lay
Exhausted.

© 2013 Phillitup


Author's Note

Phillitup
Just something I thought of. I am exhausted right now.

XXX 1/3/13

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Your writing amazes me
I REALLY like it


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

Thank you!
I can relate to this...you've summed it up quite nicely. Thanks for sharing this with us.

-kimmer

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

And thank YOU for reviewing! :)
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

My pleasure.
I like this a great deal...you capture the feeling well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

thanks!
I know exactly how you feel. Sounds like everyone needs to go out on holiday at least once a day!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great discriptions. the feeling comes across very nicely

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phillitup

11 Years Ago

Thank you

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I am 14-years-old. I find inspiration all over the place: memories, ideas, things I notice. I like believing in things that others find impossible. I think that's the way I hope for a better future. .. more..

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