Chain Verse Poem

Chain Verse Poem

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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Just screwing around

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I chased you with a lawnmower
The mower of my past
My past is full of diesel fuel
You spilled on the grass
The grass turned some weird a*s color
The color of my pain
My pain is in my a*s right now
God you drive me insane
Is sanity something we all lose
when losers come around
She was round like a meaty Zeppelin
that got to close to the ground
The ground that's covered in diesel fuel
you spilled you little fool
The fool is in a deck of cards
What will I do with you

© 2013 Baby Ricochet



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Nice, and still just a bit funny.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

thank you eddie
Rico, if a girl you are in love with is giving you a pain in the a*s, you're doing it wrong ! :D


Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

Lol! Thanks dw
interesting concept, works well here.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

Thank you Rene
ha! I love this. It's amazing what you can make those little words do.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

thank you Saratoga
Bravo on this piece, it is refreshing and defintely original. Love the line "Is sanity something we all lose
/when losers come around". Well done! :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

thank you luke
I really liked this, nice to see something original and made me giggle. good work

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

thank you jo
Is it odd that I can almost see myself reciting this to my future children?

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

LMAO! Thanks Tai
'Just screwing around' - you make it look easy BR. I never encountered the chain verse form before, thanks for the education my friend.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

Thank you ANTO
I so enjoy a quirky poem - its almost like a stream of conciousness write - one word or phrase a jumping off point to the next. Well done.
My pain is in my a*s right now - that made me laugh

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

Thank you TL
Not that familiar with chain verse poetry, your obscure musings here are off the charts and most entertaining Mark.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

thank you frieda

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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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