Lovers Dance

Lovers Dance

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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Pick you up in my lover's dance
Throw you into a spin
For you I'll dance so beautifully
in sacred lover's skin

Swirl you around like Aphrodite
with Aries in a maze
Achilles with a lover's fire
My heart and soul ablaze

The fates weave tales of lover's bliss
Pegasus breaths your name
Dance on the wings of fantasy
A satyr you can tame

Dancing on the breaking beaches
swirling through the sand
Moving you with Beelzebub
My guiding demon's hand

Dancing in the Pagan circle
around the phallus stone
Lust for flesh has deeper meaning
Than muscle blood and bone

Pick you up in my lover's dance
Throw you into a spin
Hear sweet music beckoning
Calling you from within


© 2013 Baby Ricochet



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Good write. Would like to see you pull the reader in closer to the core of your characters.
Good write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

3 Years Ago

Thank you sir
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Dye
I never know what to expect when I read your work, which is why I come back- I love surprises. This one is a great surprise with tons of sensuality.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

Thank you dye
For most people this would be a difficult poem to write. It has so many elements. Yet you do it effortlessly. That takes real talent.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

thank you Eddie
Feels like the Devil's waltz with trappings of mythical characters against a pagan sky. Will the bliss last while moving in tempo with Beelzebub? It's a dangerous dance you've got there and sweet music might not be enough to save you. Well penned.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

Thank you Blue
A most prized and guided piece that tingles in all the right places.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

Awesome. Thank you
I found this entertaining. It started off sweet and good then turned dark and lustful! Sounds like my life~ :P Nice one, Rico~

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

Thank you Claire
Wow, I'd like to see you reading this as an introduction to the next DANCING WITH THE STARS television series. It's got all the lusty, busty action my friend!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

Thank you Doug
"Pick you up in my lover's dance
Throw you into a spin"
I enjoyed reading Lovers dance.....p


Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

Thank you mary
Oh my gosh!!! That was beautiful and inspiring! I will have to show it to my girlfriend. She'll love it :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

Thank you rhea. I'm flattered.
I can get the tango feel of the tempo/meter BR. Its a brilliant classy write and the pic is a super choice to accompany - the guys face just screams Seduction
Good one

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

Thank you anto

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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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