Lovers Dance

Pick you up in my lover's dance
Throw you into a spin
For you I'll dance so beautifully
in sacred lover's skin

Swirl you around like Aphrodite
with Aries in a maze
Achilles with a lover's fire
My heart and soul ablaze

The fates weave tales of lover's bliss
Pegasus breaths your name
Dance on the wings of fantasy
A satyr you can tame

Dancing on the breaking beaches
swirling through the sand
Moving you with Beelzebub
My guiding demon's hand

Dancing in the Pagan circle
around the phallus stone
Lust for flesh has deeper meaning
Than muscle blood and bone

Pick you up in my lover's dance
Throw you into a spin
Hear sweet music beckoning
Calling you from within

Reviews

[dw817]

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Nicely done, Rico ! This is perhaps the most intellectual and passionate writing I have come across in your repertoire of poetic expertise thus far. *applause*

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks bro

[dw817]

UBetcha, gonna have a cookie, some tang, unwind with a few episodes of Robot Chicken and then BED ! Gotta wake up way too early tomorrow. :4

[Seamstress]

Wonderfully romantic poem! I love the references to mythology as well.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Seamstress

[Angi]

Wicked romantic poem, here! I thought you were an angel, then that little devil peeks through. Bad boys are so much fun. Angi~

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Angi

[TL Boehm]

Wow. this is almost beautiful - if that makes sense. I am a fan of both dance and mythology and this is a great blend. A bit of a different voice for you.
Well penned.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you TL

[Nia Hope]

Really cool poem awesome job :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Ankara

[Marie]

Are you Zeus then, dancing in disguise...?

[Baby Ricochet]

I'm Aries. Always Aries, for better or for worse.

[Tai Ryens]

Goddamnit Baby R I hate it when you spoil my allegories on cannibalism with romantic lines
No, but really, I liked that. Might as well unleash your Hades on Persephone (but make sure it is consenting)

[Baby Ricochet]

So far as I know about the only consensual partnering of equals in Greek Myth was Aries and Aphrodite and she was married to Hephaestus. Those Greek were a bunch of sex crazed philanderers, A lot like most of us modern folk

[Rita L. Sev]

A wild rhythmic tango here - well done!

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Rita

[Mark]

Great rhythm great tempo great verse! Reaaly like that line aboutlust having deeper meaning. Great job

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Mark

[Pete Langley]

You`ve cracked it with this one, mate! A beautiful frenzied whirlwind of pure passion with a surging rhythm. Super stuff. P.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Pete