Dream Girl Tanka

Dream Girl Tanka

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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I know they're not suppose to rhyme. I'm a visionary

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       Dream without a care
       Of a lass of virtue fair
        With all of that said
    I'll take a stripper instead
So long as she's bare down there

© 2013 Baby Ricochet



Author's Note

Baby Ricochet
I know. I'm an objectifying neanderthal. But I own it.

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I love this. So clever. So funny. Glad I saw it in the feed.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

3 Years Ago

thank you KL
HAHA, Ricochet! I see what you meant about your sexy poems being funny - this is no exception. I don't remember what the format of a tanka is supposed to be, but I don't care if it rhymes. That really works for this poem!

I've done the strip club thing, but the newness of it wore off quite awhile ago. You ever get a stripper to go out with you? Well, I'm taken anyway, so it doesn't matter now. Great poem, again!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

3 Years Ago

Yes I have dated a stripper before but I didn't meet her where she worked. I met her at A BBQ on the.. read more
Hahahaha you're poetry always makes me laugh xD I really like your honesty.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

3 Years Ago

Thank you siren
I don't see why there are so many negative or shocked comments. Personally, I think that poetry, whether abrasive or affronting, is merely a reflection of what is in your soul. So if this is what is in your soul, then good job!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

3 Years Ago

Thank you annie
Still anti-Naturelle BR? One day you might have a Euro-piphany lol
You DO OWN IT though - bigtime !!


Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

Lol! Thank you ANTO
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To be sure a woman would blush to her fingers' ends at the very idea of appearing publicly stark naked; but education and prejudice are everything, since it is an axiom, that where there is no feeling of self-reproach, there can assuredly be no shame. -- J. G. Stedman


Posted 4 Years Ago


dw817

4 Years Ago

I've made the popular reading list before, big brother. The problem with fame is, it is an empty pur.. read more
Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

I write to entertain. I use the pop list to see how good a particular type of poetry does vs another.. read more
dw817

4 Years Ago

Notoriety will always be appreciated by the general masses. Reach for the stars if you must, I only .. read more
I laughed, not gunna lie. I don't think it's that badly objectifying.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Sam Sin Sepultura

4 Years Ago

No problem, hopefully others find it just as humorous.
Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

Well, some people have a perpetual stick lodged up their a*s. There's sweet FA I can do about it so .. read more
Sam Sin Sepultura

4 Years Ago

They all need to shove it, write whatever you want. It can be the most offensive thing on the face o.. read more
Haha...you are ever the clever one. You should write a book of lymmericks...would be very fun :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

Ha! Maybe so. Thank you
as long as she's bare down there. too funny

Posted 4 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

4 Years Ago

Lol! Thank you

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Tampa, FL



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