A Veteran's Prayer

A Veteran's Prayer

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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Veteran's Prayer

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My Veteran's prayer

Is that our children's children

Won't have to do this

© 2014 Baby Ricochet


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Baby Ricochet
Happy Veterans day ya'll.

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I believe that should be everyone's prayer. This was deep. Well expressed, hopefully one day nobody will ever have to fight meaningless wars, ESPECIALLY considering many were waged to get rid of debts. F*****g disgusting is what war is.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Yes it is. Thank you Tai
This is amazing!
I felt this one, deep in my guts.

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Angeltress/1266806/



Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

thank you angel
Thank you, so very much, for supporting the troops. it means so much to me, and my fellow veterans.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Thank you Arrinae
Arrinae

10 Years Ago

No, thank you.
Your use of pictures alongside these simple, yet highly effective, lines really hit home hard. Well done, Rich.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Thank you Will
Those three lines are so damn powerful. The pictures had me tearing up. I am with you on this, Baby. Angi~

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

thank you angi
So powerful. That is my prayer too.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by Lourisa. I appreciate it.
wow, BR.

amen to this...to our children's children's children.

someone put a stop to war, please...

very forceful mix of words and pictures...

jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob
I so agree, very strong images to portray your thoughts.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

thank you Leeci
While I don't remember receiving a Reader Request from you for this, I will share some of my thoughts as we are friends and I consider you my big brother as you in turn have called me your little brother.

Your words are strong and the images even more so. If there is a prayer to be heard, let it be that we stop the fighting altogether.
http://bit.ly/1bt3eSM

Posted 10 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

10 Years Ago

I'm down with that

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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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