How To Pick up Girls, A Senryu

How To Pick up Girls, A Senryu

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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I swear it's true

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Keep your loins in check 
Talk to her as an equal 
and you'll do just fine 

© 2014 Baby Ricochet



Author's Note

Baby Ricochet
It's the talking to her as an equal part that screws guys up. She's not a Goddess, she's not stupid, she's not "one of the guys" and she sure as hell isn't five years old. So far as I'm concerned that's all there is to it.

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Posted 1 Year Ago


I agree. Wise advice shared.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Not a fan of this idea of Senryu.
I'm sure this is good advice but unfortunately a lot of women don't want to be an equal, they want to be superior.


Posted 2 Years Ago


Great advice BR and a well structured Senryu my friend but here in Ireland 'picking up' girls is taken literally. The Irish Gypsy (aka Travellers) do a thing called the 'grab' where a prospective suitor basically carries a girl away and kisses her and they usually follow it through after a time, by getting wed. Note: Irish travellers have a very low divorce rate.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

2 Years Ago

Now THAT'S how it's done!
Thank you, I shall put this advice to good use! Women be prepared, I've been trained by the best.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

2 Years Ago

lol! Thanks keegan
nice write keep up the good work

Posted 2 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

2 Years Ago

thank you jens
the loins, the loins, beware the loins. Yup. Smart writing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

2 Years Ago

They'll get ya every time
Words to live by for sure. No amount of fedora-tipping, feelings of entitlement, worshiping, condescension, or anything else of the sort would impress anyone at all.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

2 Years Ago

No it doesn't. Thanks Tai
equal ?haha, yeah guys treat girls as if they are something "thing" not "one"..but yeah your words are right.. well said

Posted 3 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

3 Years Ago

Tanks for stopping by
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Pax
words to live by, bravo on the droplets of insight, my friend.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Baby Ricochet

3 Years Ago

Good to see you MR PAX
Pax

3 Years Ago

good to have read your verse, my friend, its a pleasure visiting by...

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