How To Pick up Girls, A Senryu

I swear it's true

Keep your loins in check 

Talk to her as an equal 

and you'll do just fine 

Author's Note

It's the talking to her as an equal part that screws guys up. She's not a Goddess, she's not stupid, she's not "one of the guys" and she sure as hell isn't five years old. So far as I'm concerned that's all there is to it.

Reviews

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

AMEN - works the same with us gays - FYI! well done.

[Baby Ricochet]

That's what I'm saying. Thanks Thomas

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well that looks about right Baby .They really should heed these wise words :)

[Baby Ricochet]

That's what I'm saying

[Vidya Bacchus]

LOL..........:)

[hardeep sabharwal]

:),, nice advice and a nice read

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks Hardeep

[R Smith]

sound advice, must remember it! thanks mate :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks Richard

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it could be hard to do any of this...but if we just share...and listen...and be ourselves, not try to pretend or put on airs...that works.

i like the sentiment in this.

[Baby Ricochet]

Yes it does. Thanks Jacob

[Cryingkate]

AWE Not so fast there Babes... This isn't a fair testing analyses .. You forget, that Your Hot baby buns and poetry can get you anything you want..... :-)

[Baby Ricochet]

I wish it were that easy

[Cryingkate]

:-) ............... some of us make things harder on ourselves. I AM ONE Of THEM :-)

[Pryde Foltz]

Now that is some sweet talking … works on me every time:)

[Baby Ricochet]

LOL. Thank you Pryde

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Wow, That's really good, i like the message in this poem. :-)

Kaze~

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Kaze

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Lyn Anderson]

Wow, you should give lessons. For the fun of it a couple of days ago I clicked on that stupid guy who tells men how to score with chicks. I got bored and shut it off. Never did find out the secret.

[Baby Ricochet]

i don't know what the secret is either. I don't think there is one

[Lyn Anderson]

The secret is, if she wants you, she will let you pick her up.:)

[Baby Ricochet]

Sounds about right