The girl

Dating advice rhyme. I'm just glad it rhymes in most places

Confused by porn and loneliness 

Men lose it in a swirl 

When they can't tell the difference 

between p***y and the girl 

A girl's a vulnerable human being 

To some that's a surprise 

Stop lusting for that a*s so much 

and you might realize 

You wanna stand out from the pack 

you gotta earn her trust

You're not another p***y junkie 

and all you got is lust

Horn dogs are sniffing up her skirt

a hundred times a day 

She's cutting them off constantly 

So she can get away

You might just be another dog

who learned to bark some game 

or the man she's longing for 

Her heart your only aim 

She's gonna run her tests on you 

To see how you unfurl 

If you can tell the difference 

Between p***y and the girl 

She gives a little then pulls away

Gives you some runaround 

You lose your cool or turn lap dog

You'll lose her on this round 

Lay off the texts and messages

Give her some room to breath 

To much attention creeps her out 

A stalker she don't need 

Don't be so hot to tap that a*s 

You gotta hold back true 

You play this next round perfectly

She'll give it all to you 

It's two moves forward one move back 

She'll hold out to the end 

She's gotta know you won't use force 

On this her life depends 

Not such a crazy game she plays 

Her life and limb's at stake 

Run her course and jump her  hoops 

and then she knows it's safe 

Now you won the girl you wanted 

Your diamond and your pearl 

Cause you could tell the difference 

Between p***y and the girl 

Author's Note

There's a HUGE difference between her knowing she's safe with you and you being "safe"
Maybe for another poem. Christ, I don't know. I'm just glad I finally wrote a flipping rhyme . Yes we all know the title's really "Pussy and the Girl" but the word "pussy" would cost me readers.

Reviews

[Duncan Brown]

Love love love love love love.............................

[Mary Christabel George]

You haven't changed at all.
But I am happy you have come up with this piece.
You understand what a girl really wants.
Being a man understanding this is commendable, for you know the difference between p***y & girl, so we can understand the difference between dog & real MAN.

[613]

Wow, this was great! Very humorous, so true. Extremely well written.

- Brittney

[Annabelle Lee]

Thanks fir writing ricochet, nice to see the rhyme. That same non-but very- professional ricochet flow is going on here, nicely done

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you AnnaBelle

[Tiana]

Enjoyed your perspectives! You have a way of getting your message across that has me smiling from ear to ear! :)) Awesome writing! :))

[Baby Ricochet]

Thanks Island Woman

[Troy Henson]

Great piece. If there are relationships that are built on game playing there are dangers. No trust and that thought of never really knowing if there is trye love. Painful!

Troy

[Baby Ricochet]

thanks troy

[Rita L. Sev]

There's no room for games in a relationship... too bad some people - men and women - don't know this. Good message, and good rhyming.

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Rita

[Michael G.]

Did a weight fall on the toe, and cut off the thought and blood flow? BR, the councilor of life, rhyming?!!? I knew you had it in you!
Good thoughts made here with good life points. More people should listen to your sound advice. You are more than just a pretty face, BR.

[Baby Ricochet]

LOL! Thankyou MR G

[AprilRN1210]

I think you touched on a lot of good points here.. too many people look at it like a game... you move here, what should my next move be?.. instead of just being honest... wait.. what is that... honesty?.. communication of feelings... needs... wants... what a concept right?... he isn't a big bank account with zeros, she isn't a piece of meat.... nicely done again:)

[Baby Ricochet]

thank you April

[AprilRN1210]

you're welcome... oh by the way... "Give her some room to breath".. did you mean "breathe?"

[Baby Ricochet]

I'm sure I did

[R Smith]

Brilliant Baby, absolutely great and yes full of rhymes, a great example of how to handle a woman, why do we believe they love those bad guys who treat them bad, never! be a gentleman and win any heart, your best poem ever in my opinion thank you :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Thank you Richard