A pointless short very short story

A pointless short very short story

A Poem by Baby Ricochet
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Just loosing up

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I saw a billboard 
It was in spanish 
I can't read Spanish 
So I don't know what it said 
It was a guy in a suit with a baseball bat 
It had to be a lawyer 
Lawyers are always threatening to kick someone's a*s 
There's an insanely hot spanish chick at the gym I go to
Jesus Christ on a Pogo stick is that girl ever packing 
If I dared tried talking to her 
or even look at her for too long
My girl might just smack the s**t out of me with a baseball bat 
Maybe that's what the sign said
I can't read spanish so how would I know 
I said this story was pointless. 

© 2015 Baby Ricochet



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Posted 1 Year Ago


Up to your usual fun I see. Glad to read you again.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Fantastic pointless story! I forgot how much I enjoy your use of language and your honesty, keep them coming!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Thought it was funny! Sometimes we just need to write because we can. I collect unicorns. That's pointless. Well a unicorn has a point but there's no point to the point. My point being...where are you?

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lyn Anderson

1 Year Ago

Can a person like a review? Because I like this review. I missed you and your quirky sense of humour.. read more
How is this pointless?? I actually needed this

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Troy Henson

1 Year Ago

ah well thats charming. who would take to WC to carry on like this??
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Not pointless -- extremely entertaining that it cracked me up!

Posted 2 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I like the way you connect things, playful and entertaining.
Nice work.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on September 21, 2015
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Baby Ricochet
Baby Ricochet

Tampa, FL



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I write just for the hell of it A way to spend some time Blurting out in cyber space Whatever's on my mind Maybe funny maybe tragic Emotional and raw Politi.. more..

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