Stormlit

wild-tiger-eyed

jaded

I am cracked

and raining inside

vein-rivered

keyed

to the stretch

of my moon fray

savagely-glittered

bulleting

the low-tidal rumor

of his mouth

spit-fired

plunging

I am the comet

I am the gun

Reviews

[Revolutionary]

Very emotional words strung together delightfully.

[Wolfwind]

Wow! What a run of vivid, down the page and into a lightning storm at a zoo filled with aphrodisiacs and stoned firemen, fishing in a pool for glow in the dark swiss cheese.... =)

The first thought I had on this I won't say... it's just to taboo... and I was probably way off since it doesn't have an adult rating on it.... so...
I'll go with option two which is.... Something akin to being tired of hearing the same s**t come out of a persons mouth day in and out and finally either breaking and blowing up or simply breaking and taking it, over and over in some sort of masochistic ritual.

Once again... I like how the pieces of ink you create sound on the tongue!

Nicely put together!
Aaron - Wolfwind