You, Forever Ago

You, Forever Ago

A Poem by demon_days

I know every cracked line charting your face
Those flickering rays of light kissing your skin
You -- your many youths -- my nothing love forsaken.
Cream and Bailey's infused coffee steroid shots ago,
Post-revelry unwinding chit chat cigarette puffs ago,
Viscous dusk to dawn searing drunken stupors ago,
Psychedelia's sonic shockwaves' sensations ago,
White rabbit's phantasmagoric burnout highs ago,                 
Unshed tears' midnight staccato of whispers ago, --
Would "then" you take a chance on me and you?

© 2013 demon_days


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It's...beautiful.
Unshed tears' midnight staccato of whispers ago, --
Would "then" you take a chance on me and you?
Love it, love it!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


It flows really well - almost song-like. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm surprised no one has reviewed this yet. I love this, I love the style, the flow, the word use. Nice job.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on April 1, 2012
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