Sore Lips

Sore Lips

A Poem by demon_days

Hopelessly

Kissed him

So many times

From afar


© 2012 demon_days



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We are amazing lovers from afar, hoping he'll / she'll finally notice us and pick us out of the crowd, I can relate to this one! great job!

Posted 10 Months Ago
Short and sweet....I like it.

Posted 11 Months Ago
Wow... With so few words you have Put your feelings so clearly and loudly. Not a word more, not a word less is needed. Perfect. This poem calls out to me. I can identify with this. And you have managed to achieve that with eight words. Good work. keep going

Posted 1 Year Ago

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Added on April 10, 2012
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Beats of poetry as beauty? Not here. These are tales of destruction. Hunger. Burn. Sensation revisited. This is my Golgotha. This is me spewing furor out of my psyche to emerge lighter, almost normal. more..

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