Love

The forces of drives

The truth of love
The greatest feeling of above
Unable to to tell why
you won't be able to deny

You may feel infatuation
Not the feeling of temptation
You are unable to find the explanation
Your actually lost in misinterpretation

It is not about the outside
Its something you are able to abide
Not for something to look up to
You have to find the right view

Able to chase after
Be enjoyed with laughter
Unknown to the way you are led
like you are being lost like a piece of thread

It consist of reasons
Just as the way we have seasons
The truth is that it is unknown
Its just something you will be shown

Reviews

[Lorraine]

I love the way you described love in different ways and only to end up saying it is something "unknown". The contradiction is amazing but still agreeable. I love the concept of love being so many things but never truly something knowable. Also your attempt at rhyming is fascinating.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Mauricio Montoya]

good write anyway you put it

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

To me your rhyme was a bit overwhelming, but this is good effort nonetheless!
My favorite lines:
The truth is that it is unknown
Its just something you will be shown

We can never define love. It...just is. :)
Keep writing,
Alex

[Daydreamer54]

great rhyme scheme! i enjoyed reading this poem. it's true to me that people overuse this word a lot and don''t even know the true meanong of it. They just use it carelessly. Especially in relationships.

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem told the truth. When love come into your life. Can't be stop. I like this poem. I like the statements made in the poem. Last lines are true. Love had no reason but is as powerful as anything we do in a life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Hailey]

yes, it does a good job of explaining the feeling of love and has a nice flow, so nice job on this

[just rose.]

I think you do a very good job with rhyme here, and this would be great as a spoken word piece.

[Wicahpi]

...and something you simply feel with every fiber of one's being.

I liked your outlook on recognizing 'love'.
Well done