The Iris of Longing

The Iris of Longing

A Poem by demureminds

I caught the glimpse

of wistful eyes

in passion,

the iris of longing,

anticipating

the lick of

embrace in arms

of splendor,

grasping hips 

of ardor’s cradle,

his pupils 

echoing me.


© 2012 demureminds



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his pupils echoing me....

loved that

a wishful gaze locked in speechless sound..

:)

Posted 9 Months Ago


demureminds

9 Months Ago

Thanks (:
Antonio Valentino

9 Months Ago

soytenly.. :))
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Tai
I love the title you assign to it, clever use of words.

Posted 9 Months Ago


demureminds

9 Months Ago

Thank you (:
I love the iris of longing and lick of embrace, but this is an amazing little burst of imagery throughout :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


demureminds

9 Months Ago

Thank you (:
kublakhan27

9 Months Ago

No problem :)

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demureminds
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20. California, US. Student: Bio Major. Coffee Enthusiast. Occasional writer. Read if you please. more..

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A Poem by demureminds