Love is Cyclical

Love is Cyclical

A Poem by Denise
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Just pent up emotions from past relationship issues and current ones

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I have once loved deeply and lost
I have once held my head so high I thought nothing could bring it down so low
I have experienced my own version of hell and back again
Through it all I built strength, courage and self knowledge
Yet I continue to make mistakes that I thought I learned from
I realize it begins with love and it ends with love
Pain is a never ending experience we all must suffer
Love is the fabric that holds this universe together
And the snag that unravels it

© 2011 Denise


Author's Note

Denise
didn't worry or think about grammar..just a flow of my thoughts. Just like to hear any opinions or positive criticism. Thanks!

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Great work! Yes, we ALL can relate to this! This is eloquently stated...been there, done that...and yeah, it hurt..but I'm better for it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


and the snag that unravels it...nice ending, a great write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


and in the unraveling we find a truth ...

that graphic brought back a memory ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like this poem Denise. I like how you demonstrate the pleasurable and destructive aspects of love. Personally I do experience love as you would. I'm really different about that, but I still find your poem as intriguing. I hope that one day you will find your one true love, and will allow you to experience the more happy side of its nature. I don't have any suggestions for improvement here.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is very insightful to someone, myself, who has never been in love.

Is this based on actual events?

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 7, 2011
Last Updated on February 12, 2011
Tags: love, heartbreak, relationships

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Denise
Denise

Williamsport, PA



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