You - Holding My Heart

You - Holding My Heart

A Poem by Denise
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for the one I love

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I want to hold your hand within mine,
for eternity, until the end of time.
Time is relative,
but my time with you is relevent,
and unless I'm with you I'd rather be celebate.
Celebrating every moment we share,
living freely,
wholey,
and without care.

I want to not only hear,
but understand your thoughts.
Beacause without you
the fight has been fought.
Fighting to guideour destiny to follow our hearts,
but even the rest ome including my head
says to me - 
You,
Yes you,
are the best for me

© 2011 Denise


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Wow! that’s how I feel about this girl; what to say to a person, I think you’ve done a great job here in expressing those feeling I mean right down to the letter. Excellent write.



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Added on February 11, 2011
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Denise
Denise

Williamsport, PA



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I'm still quite new to the writing world other than the fact I enjoyed and excelled at English through my years of school and college. I mostly just write poetry because of my scattered mind and deep .. more..

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