Poetic Building Blocks

Oh how my mind wanders...

Creation --
A poet weaves words of hallucination into
Simulation --
Of fantasy dreamscapes abundant with
Keepsakes --
Tenderly painted across canvas as enchanting as
Seascapes --
Whipping up waves of rhythm and
Moonlight --
Lighting a path for passersby and creating a fountain of
Stimuli --
Soothing the soul and touching the heart identifying the
Art --
Of humanity controlled by the suppression of
Society --
Hiding from reality and living the life of duality the expression of
Emotion --
Hitting the senses with a power beyond the oceans
Violently --
Warring with peace, love, hate and
Joy --
Is a body’s empowerment that is left
Cowering --
Alone in the corner’s of one’s mind opened with care by
Artists --
Willing to sacrifice their raw emotions pent up inside looking for
Escape --
Traveling down roads into the unknown
Creation.

Author's Note

When read does it come across as each single word line end the sentence before and start the new sentence below?

Special thanks to Tommy for the little nudge to create a more complete ending :)

Reviews

[ice]

It is very smooooth, Denise..The words are well chosen, it is easy to read..and all true..

[An owl on the moon]

The image brilliantly breathes out the tone... You come full circle with this dance through the vibrance of dreams and the darkness of humanity... Powerful words and unique style. Captivating.

[kuru]

this is something different....i must say i was confused in the beginning then once i got into it the intensity built up! i didn't want it to end! it was a nice ride :)

[Tommy]

Yes, it runs into each end and begginning very well, and I like the continuous flow it conceives. I love it how it is, but I think it would be cool to end it with the begginning word to complete the affect. like:

Escape--
Traveling down roads into the unknowns of
Creation..

Just a thought. You bring to light a new form or at least one that I haven't seen, and I love it.

Great Write Denise!
RLG,
Tommy