Maternal

i introduced myself

to your mother yesterday

and then

i ate her

she was high on cholesterol

40% fat

less than 1% of the RDA requirements

and

took too long to cook

i left her clothing on

like aluminum foil

holding sauce

on a game hen

to keep in the flavor

she had served her family well

and her family was well served

by the chilly in the crockpot...

Reviews

[Christopher Todd Dallas]

Diversity in your writing will do more for you than structure or meter.
I misspelled, "chilly." Meant to be, "chili."

[Honeypot]

Lol! Funny and kind of chilling all in one. Cannibals are kind of creepy to think about. There was a lot of humor in this which lends well to no punctuation and capitalization. This shows a lot of your versatility.

[Lola Nation]

HAH! Witty and funny.

no RDA value but definitely a great read.