I was lonely

I was lonely

A Poem by Destiny_Brown

I was agile but not slick

I lived in a dark cave once

Poignant reminder of the lonely

Was it sorrow?

 

I almost forgot that I’m not so grand

The dreadful creature

 

Please be partial to my muscle of blood

So much of nothing

Too much of everything

I’d like to think we’re all lost

 

I almost forgot that I’m not so grand

The dreadful creature

 

I was seized by the cold

Chewed out by the shadows

And spit out by the screams

Hauntingly crippled

Beautifully bloodied

Forgetfully nostalgic

 

Don’t let it end us

I can’t let it end us

I mean me

The dreadful creature

 

Is she ready to restart?


© 2017 Destiny_Brown



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Such depth of words in a state of wonder and guess we all feel a bit lonely some harder than others ever will. But very solid muse:)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny_Brown

2 Months Ago

Yes! Very true thanks for the review!
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2 Months Ago

You are very welcome
I suppose we all have a '' Me '' ''Us'' and '' Them''. Very likable read. Makes one truly wonder who or what lurks on the inside at times. Many battles are most often fought with self. Great write.

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Destiny_Brown

12 Months Ago

Very true! Thanks for taking the time to read!
Dwayne J. Keeves

12 Months Ago

I enjoyed your write. Keep it going.

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Added on September 14, 2017
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Tags: depression, loneliness

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Destiny_Brown
Destiny_Brown

Enfield, CT



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Hi there Junior at University of Connecticut would appreciate any feedback on my writing good or bad I love to meet new people Obsessed with space, music, reading/writing Cant't really summarize.. more..

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