My wish

As I lay on my death bed they asked for my final wish. What was my final wish? I had never thought about that. Would it be to have that dress I wanted,? Or maybe those shoes? No those would be selfish wishes. I had to think about my family..about him. I had made up my mind... but it wasn't a wish the doctors or my family ccould do. I wished...for him to forget me. So he wouldn't have to deal with the pain. Then I felt complete and I shut my eyes and let the darkness creep slowly upon me.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

If you break up the poem. Would make the poem more easy to read. I like the questions and the desire of the poem. Wishes can make us hope and can teach us the truth. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Daniel Amicucci]

thank all of you... and Starrbitt I miss you D:

[Starrbitt]

AW its an adorably sad poem..nice job my friend :) Britteny just sneezed on me XD

[Lauren Riddick]

This is a very dark but thoughtful poem. Although, there's no rhyme scheme, you can still feel the emotions beat. Good job!

[Dream Eater]

:'(((