Watching.

I watched her looking around nervously she knew someone was following her but she couldn't see me. Soon she'll be buried in the ground with the other girls I killed.

Author's Note

Just something for a contest.

Reviews

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Ohh my.. a good description of a moment in the mind of a killer.

[Leon C]

Good stuff. Short and sweet which I assume was the point of the contest.

I would consider changing the last word. Look for something a wee bit more creepy.
You have told us they are buried in the ground so we can assume they are dead - so consider something off centre like - LOVED or DESIRED. I think you need to create a juxtaposition between your character's motives and actions.

I liked it.

[KittyKatgirl]

Thank you so much and yeah I will :)