She Is Everything

It's funny how the darkest of situations make the brightest pieces of literature.

She has my heart in the palm of her hands.
For her, I'd walk through the endless hot sands.
Just to show her how much I truly care.
Destined for each other, we were to pair.

She takes me to a place no one else can.
Not being with you was never the plan.
I'll always remember the time we spent.
Spoken or not, the words I said I meant.

My dreams are where I can always see you.
Thinking of what we had is hard to do.
For you, a special place I'll always hold.
The words I said and the ones never told.

To me you are everything; my world.
We once danced all night; back and forth we twirled.
The scars that you left me with still burn bright.
A chance is all I need to make it right.

Reviews

[Emma Joy]

Love could be called an obsession for sure, and seems that's how you see and feel it; your poem is full of regretful passion, '.. For you, a special place I'll always hold.~ The words I said and the ones never told.'

However, the impression i get is that you're ready to temper it a little, return to a calm, warm, wonderful emotion, find a way back to someone you truly love.

Sad words but .. ripe and ready.

[brittneymarie]

What a sweet and genuine poem. I enjoy the meaning behind your writing because most of us can relate to it, well done !

[koty bell]

this one reminds me of shes everything by brad paisley a little bit great poem:))

[PoppySilver]

Love is something we all underestimate at times, it is one of the strangest emotions isn't it?!
This is wonderfully vibrant love and still you hold hope, lovely xoxo

[Honey54]

LOVELY! AND SO REAL! PERFECT FLOW AND OH! OH! OH! BTW I LOVE YOUR SENSITIVE SIDE DILLON! YOUR WELL INTUNED! :D

[SheActsLikeSummer]

Beautiful poem. I really enjoyed it. The are a couple typos, so watch out, those will make an imprint on how well you do in the contest. But it's really minor so it won't count for much. Wonderful job, good luck!

[Thrinna Mae]

Haha! Love the author's note...I totally agree!
This poem is very passionate and full of undeniable love...
Great work!
:)))

[Wolfhilde]

Nice poem. well writen

["jens books".]

nice poem i liked it good job