Summer Rain

Summer Rain

A Poem by gabrielle
"

To hold and to let go

"


Along the shoreline of this valley

We conceived our dreams

A new journey on summer time-

You and I shall become One

 

But cold was Cymopoleia’s wrath

She sent tides to unbound our bond

And on this shore- dreams crumbled.

To summer and beyond, thus, I mourned

 

Another leap year and a year gone by

I stand yet again upon this coast. Behold!

-the summer sun sparkles once more

Ah, my love, I could feel you smiling back.

 



© 2014 gabrielle



Author's Note

gabrielle
photo from http://abstract.desktopnexus.com/wallpaper/1119397/


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Separated lovers and time passing. A beautiful piece, mournful and quiet.

Posted 1 Year Ago


lovers being parted by unforeseen circumstances, inevitable situations, challenges, which like the seasons also pass - there is hope for a love that remains loyal and steady as a rock

steph

Posted 1 Year Ago


gabrielle

1 Year Ago

Thanks, steph. With your writing caliber, i am not so much comfortable when you read my writings/ram.. read more
highonwords

1 Year Ago

ate gabs, i always want to improve my writing, that means i should be conscientious in searching wha.. read more
Absolutely lovely and lively!♥

Posted 3 Years Ago


Title is enough to bring my attention. Is great I simply enjoyed !!

Posted 3 Years Ago


gabrielle

3 Years Ago

thank you eve!
As my eyes got this beautiful title "Summer Rain" .. I couldn`t stop myself reading this because yeah, rains are what I love the most in the world indeed. Your this poem`s dispersing many aspects of LOVE around the world with some warmed feelings of your heart ~~ with some emotions as well. Yeah, some memories are not meant to be forgettable especially when the memories are made in rain ~~ summer rain ~~ all verses are beautiful ... I simply enjoyed reading this precious poem!

Posted 3 Years Ago


gabrielle

3 Years Ago

Thank you once again stephen
I love this poem, it's beautifully written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


gabrielle

3 Years Ago

thank you ashley
what a well written piece and your style is perfect. excellent write

Posted 3 Years Ago


gabrielle

3 Years Ago

Thank you mark
"Along the shoreline of this valley
We conceived our dreams
A new journey on summer time-
You and I shall become One"

Posted 3 Years Ago


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DrD
I chose to respond to this work because of its elegance and visuality. Excellent word choice and metaphor with a theme, though common, constructed to still bring memories and lost feelings. Very well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago


gabrielle

3 Years Ago

Thank you DrD :)
A lost summer love, a lost dream and the hope of reunion. Ah, such Summer Rain.

Keep writing, Gabs. You are tremendously growing. Bringing a reader into the experience, into the scene is not an easy task but you have achieved it here. Keep the pen on this right track...

Posted 3 Years Ago


gabrielle

3 Years Ago

Thank you belle. :)

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Added on April 2, 2013
Last Updated on April 8, 2014
Tags: summer, love, marriage, death, letting go, happiness, bliss, second chance

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I write as a form of diversion and so far, i find it therapeutic. I still struggle with words and proper diction, among others, but I do hope to improve such things in time. Thank you. more..

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