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Summer Rain

Summer Rain

A Poem by gabrielle
"

To hold and to let go

"


Along the shoreline of this valley

We conceived our dreams

A new journey on summer time-

You and I shall become One

 

But cold was Cymopoleia’s wrath

She sent tides to unbound our bond

And on this shore- dreams crumbled.

To summer and beyond, thus, I mourned

 

Another leap year and a year gone by

I stand yet again upon this coast. Behold!

-the summer sun sparkles once more

Ah, my love, I could feel you smiling back.

 



© 2014 gabrielle



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gabrielle
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I like this write a lot for it has this calssic feelings about it too...Well penned...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Beautiful write, is he died? during the wrath of high tides? the ending is settled in unconditional affection of love. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


gabrielle

4 Years Ago

:-) Thanks marc.
To regain the composure of a lost love, tampered with by unforeseen things. This was a beautiful write!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wonderfully witten poignant yet affirming, love loss and moving on!

Posted 4 Years Ago


gabrielle

4 Years Ago

thanks moon!
Nature always has its way to intervene our precious lives. Maybe for the best. Who knows? Your words are classic. Marked with elegance and tasteful presentation. I sense not reconcilation of two people but a birth and acceptance of a new love. Exceptional write, gabrielle.


When someone leaves, it's because someone else is about to arrive. - Paulo Coelho

Posted 4 Years Ago


gabrielle

4 Years Ago

your ability to look beyond plain words and how eloquently you expressed them are inspiring. thank y.. read more
Such a beautiful poem...such a beautiful end...
True love is all about reconciliation and moving on...
Gabrielle...you proved it beyond doubt with these poetic and beautiful lines!

"-the summer sun sparkles once more
Ah, my love, I could feel you smiling back" - I can feel the warmth and the hope...

Keep writing and shining! It was great to read!

Posted 4 Years Ago


gabrielle

4 Years Ago

that's very kind divya. Thank you very much.
Bittersweet, well said!

Posted 4 Years Ago


gabrielle

4 Years Ago

Thanks frieda
A good melancholic thought, or reminiscines in summer's affair, great write with such metaphor as you nailed it at the concluding stanzas, a bright moment like the summer.

Posted 4 Years Ago


gabrielle

4 Years Ago

thank you for the read and review
Whao, sweet poem you got here, nice one (:

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Pax
a sublime sadness.... "i know" and many approve to who have read your work...
wonderful work!

Posted 4 Years Ago


gabrielle

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much kabayan!

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Added on April 2, 2013
Last Updated on April 8, 2014
Tags: summer, love, marriage, death, letting go, happiness, bliss, second chance

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I write as a form of diversion and so far, i find it therapeutic. I still struggle with words and proper diction, among others, but I do hope to improve such things in time. Thank you. more..

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