The Bee

A dog, a bee!

Ambitious bee, you flit by my dog's mouth,
Unaware of her hunger for you.
Carnivore that she is,
She will snap you up.
And you will sting her in the last throes of life
As it leaves you.

Reviews

[OT]

ohhh so many sting in the final moments some will bring the dog with them!!

[.......]

such a lovely little write.

[quinfinn]

what a delightful and playful piece! concise and complete. great job!

[Judy Ponceby]

This is so descriptive of the event! :) Trading traumas. I'm not sure who to feel sorry for in your poem. :) I really like this :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Fighting til the bitter end........awesome!

[FJ Davis]

Neat--somewhat ominous--little ditty. Japanese flavor.