Teach Me Philosophy

Teach Me Philosophy

A Poem by MerylDivya
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Woman in Love

"
I cannot find the definition
For what's in my soul
It's not a rare condition
But it's a part of my whole

A feather gliding down
To the waiting solid ground
Teach me philosophy
There's nothing I cannot be

When I look into his eyes
I start to tremble and chill
And when he looks back into mine
I can feel my heart swell

Beauty is skin deep
Aging is predictable
Growing fonder of you
Is only natural

I can taste your sweet breath
And your soft feather lips
And I long everyday
For your sweet kiss

I want you to want me
Through the depths of your soul
I want you to need me
As I make your parts into a whole

A loving embrace 
Fills us with grace
There is nothing left to defend
We shall have no end

Every time we're apart i think of him
It is a gift not a sin
And a fantastical whim
In which my heart swims

© 2014 MerylDivya


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this is smooth...i really like your use of slant rhyme in this...
a very romantic love poem...in 5th stanza, did you mean "And your soft feather lips"? that is how i read that line...but yes, emily D. made such good use of slant rhyme, and you make it so natural...i am not so much a fan of rhyme, but like it in this poem very much...you are subtle...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MerylDivya

9 Years Ago

Yes, indeed I meant your. I often skip proofreading when I write. Thank you for helping. I didn't ev.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

slant rhyme or near rhyme as it is also called, is when the words are close but not exact in their r.. read more



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This a good write. Perhaps a little disjointed in the third stanza. Though maybe I am getting the rhyme here. But the rhythm is good and it flows well. Over all I do like it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


When I wrote this for an ex in Tucson we had gone to a bookstore and there was a woman with a guitar outside. She read this poem and put it to music while singing the poem! It's better than getting a reward for it in my opinion.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is one interesting write, and the end was essence of your deep and meaningful poetry.

Posted 9 Years Ago


MerylDivya

9 Years Ago

thank you so much
A. Amos

9 Years Ago

You're most welcome...
a sweet poem. well written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is such a romantic beautiful poem...being a hopeless romantic myself, i really enjoy these sorts of poems. goo job, i loved it

Posted 9 Years Ago


Really calm and inviting I felt that you where sharing your feelings while I was reading. It is always a good moment the coming to gether with another one in union. Very pleasant to read and soothing like in waves.
It must be my own idiocy however that I created a picture of a Philosophical proportions in my head and at every paragraph I was actively trying to "figure it out" when Love is relentless and will not abide by that. Thanyou DivyaGurl .

Posted 9 Years Ago


MerylDivya

9 Years Ago

Than you Rene
Enjoyed, any of these stanzas could stand alone....like the soft feather lips one the best!

Posted 9 Years Ago


MerylDivya

9 Years Ago

Thank You.
this is smooth...i really like your use of slant rhyme in this...
a very romantic love poem...in 5th stanza, did you mean "And your soft feather lips"? that is how i read that line...but yes, emily D. made such good use of slant rhyme, and you make it so natural...i am not so much a fan of rhyme, but like it in this poem very much...you are subtle...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MerylDivya

9 Years Ago

Yes, indeed I meant your. I often skip proofreading when I write. Thank you for helping. I didn't ev.. read more
jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

slant rhyme or near rhyme as it is also called, is when the words are close but not exact in their r.. read more

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