fame?

why is IT so inticing

Fame

I never want to be them

Who are they?

What are they doing?

Who do they hang around?

All those questions

Are the ones they get asked

Why do they let themselves?

How can they enjoy it?

The greed in their eyes pollute the world

Why is it they get to be better because all they do is smile and wave

Crowds go to see them do nothing but walk a red carpet

Why am I suffering finding out who I am and who I’m going to be

When they had their life planed out once they get on the stage

Why do they act like gods and tell us to do

Why do we follow?

How simple is our mind that we follow the people who have more than us

Why do we do all the stuff?

Call it jealousy I have but I’m determined to see things different

Why do they hate anyone that’s sees things differently?

Why is my TV screen showing me images of the latest celebrity scandal?

Why is it fame

Maybe I’m wrong, I really hope I’m wrong

Because following this madness only makes me dumber

If not it explains all those mad men

Author's Note

i would love to here what you guys think

Reviews

[Rasi Rana]

Exactly)for most of them I do think the same)

Call it jealousy I have but I’m determined to see things different
Why do they hate anyone that’s sees things differently?
best lines)

[Sami Khalil]

You write splendidly and convey marvelously...I like the pyramid form of this poem...:)........

[soulesswriter]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[Bianca]

I like this!(btw you spelled determined as determent ) basically because it's your opinion I like seeing opinions it's like viewing something through another person's eyes.

[soulesswriter]

Thanx a lot and I'll fix that soon I like ur writing 2

[soulesswriter]

thanks for the grammar fix i fixed it i thin so thank u that was an embarrassing mistake.

[Bianca]

That's ok. I bet if you look at mine you'll see some mispellings I made that weren't obvious to me at the moment I was typing either. xD

[soulesswriter]

All cool thanks

[Sami Khalil]

You ask some good questions to be answered...A splendid poem...:)..............

[soulesswriter]

thanks i really appreciate it

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..............

[soulesswriter]

Feel free to look at my other writing I'll check urs out later

[Sami Khalil]

:).........................