Winter Comes

Winter Comes

A Poem by Debbie Barry
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A new scrap of verse that came to me at lunch today.

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Sunlight streaming

Through dusty windows

Dimly lights

The room below.

 

Naked tree limbs

Against the sky

Herald the winter,

And the coming of snow.


© 2017 Debbie Barry



Author's Note

Debbie Barry
A new poem. Initial reactions welcome.

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You have spoken well of the winter in a few lines, Debbie. Although it did make me shiver, the imagery captures the approach of winter very well. Cheers!!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie Barry

1 Month Ago

Thanks, Karen! I'm really pleased that you enjoyed it. If it made you shiver, then it was successf.. read more
Karen Redburn

1 Month Ago

It did and Happy Sunday to you as well, my friend!
Debbie Barry

1 Month Ago

Thank you!
Once again your poems have that perfect mix of imagery and rhyme. Your poems are magical and incredible. My students would absolutely love your verses. Thanks for sharing! Whenever I need a smile, I read your poems.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheRavensWoods

1 Month Ago

That's amazing! I love that.
Debbie Barry

1 Month Ago

She's a fun, spunky kid. She claims to hate books, but her actions say otherwise.
TheRavensWoods

1 Month Ago

I have a few of those. Lol.
A gray shade of a poem...illumined only by dust filtered sun. It offers a certain ambiance or atmosphere that makes one long to curl up under the quilts like a lazy December morning. I enjoyed.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie Barry

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Fabian. I love your review. That's just the feeling I was going for. I'm really please.. read more

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Debbie Barry
Debbie Barry

Clarkston, MI



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I live with my husband in southeastern Michigan with our two cats, Mister and Goblin. We enjoy exploring history through French and Indian War re-enactment and through medieval re-enactment in the So.. more..

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