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A Mother's Pride

A Mother's Pride

A Poem by Debbie Barry
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A new poem, about my sons.

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My little boys

Have grown to men:

How did the time

Pass away so soon?

 

My little boys

Are children no more;

What does their future

Have in store?

 

My little boys

Will succeed;

We've given them

The tools they need.

 

My little boys,

All grown up now,

Grown tall, and older,

Anyhow.

 

My mother's pride

Will never end,

Since my sons

Have become my friends.


© 2017 Debbie Barry



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Really sweet indeed. The emotions can be felt in each word. The flow is soft and gentle.
Beautiful poem from a mothers heart to her sons. I am sure they were so proud.
Wonderful!

:-)))

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie Barry

7 Months Ago

Thank you, Silmara. That's a lovely review, and I appreciate your comments. They're good boys, and.. read more
Silmara McGarry

7 Months Ago

You are most welcome, dear!
Thanks God to that ;-)
I love this one and it is sweet.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie Barry

7 Months Ago

Thanks,Diane!
Children grow very fast, and before you know they are adults and the wonderful relationship you have with your Sons shows what a great mom you are! They appreciate being your friends too.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie Barry

7 Months Ago

Thank you, Mrudula! I appreciate your kind words, my friend.
Mrudula Rani

7 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Your pride and joy indeed. May God keep them close and in His loving care as yours.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie Barry

7 Months Ago

Thank you, Sami! Amen to your prayer. Thank you for reading my poem, and leaving a sweet review.
Sami Khalil

7 Months Ago

You are welcome.
Now you brought tears of love in my eyes... I love babies. And this boys are angelic. They are so cute. I love the eldest's smile. You are so blessed.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie Barry

7 Months Ago

Thank you, my dear. Yes, I have been greatly blessed.

My son have lived away from me.. read more
Mirror

7 Months Ago

Very much welcome, Debbie.
Sweet and familiar, as most parents know. There's great risk involved in having children but also great reward. My oldest son is 48 and I still think of him as my boy.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie Barry

7 Months Ago

Your son and I are of an age. Yes, I alwaysd think of them as they were when they were small, even .. read more
Yeah, kids just don't stay kids for long these days.
But if you've shown them the way.
Then you can stand tall, and congratulate yourself on a job well done.

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Debbie Barry

8 Months Ago

Thanks for the nice comments, Paul. You're absolutely right.

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Added on November 9, 2017
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Debbie Barry
Debbie Barry

Clarkston, MI



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I live with my husband in southeastern Michigan with our two cats, Mister and Goblin. We enjoy exploring history through French and Indian War re-enactment and through medieval re-enactment in the So.. more..

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