Man Made of Fire

 

I fell in love with a man made of fire His flames licked my arms and burned my skin I welcomed the heat I let it surround me The heat rose and brought my heart with it The man made of fire took my heart and held it He melted the ice that encased it and let it beat again Let me breathe again I’ve been holding in for so long Waiting on someone to save me Waiting on me to save me I opened my eyes and let his fire blind me This man made of fire with his glorious heat Melted me to the core Freed my soul of its shackles  This man made of fire held me As the last tremor of my sobs died As my last tear shed and evaporated I listened to his heart as time ticked by It beat along with each second Beat Beat Beat This man made of fire held my face and told me that he loved me. He leaned his face towards mine and kissed my lips His fire enveloped me and we disappeared forever.

Reviews

[John A Common]

Nice job. I realy like the up beat and powerfull message of this peice.

[MIKE]

Your words are full of feeling and promise for those who doubt the power of love and kindness to grow hope. I love the honesty.
MIke