The Dandelion ღ KKD ღ

Hello Donna,
This is an awesome metaphoric poem you have written here.I think a lot of people may feel this way at some point in their life when it is filled with chaos for whatever reason.Maybe this undying wind is God's will letting the dandelion see all of its choices before allowing it to plant its seed and live long and prosperous.
Thank you for sharing this thought provoking poem with us and keep up the great work.
Don

Posted 1 Year Ago

This brings back all the childhood memories of when I would run after dandelions, hardly ever catching any of their elusive silver magic, and when you do, relief empties inside of you, and you'd say to yourself: "Now what?"

Very beautiful poem. I love the way you bring out the meaning of the dandelion, drifting in time forever, alone. It really took this poem's magic, along with the soothing background music, to remind me of the childish innocence it seems I have already lost.

Great work!

Luke

Posted 11 Months Ago

Hi Donna,
So many thoughts expressed here touch my heart but this "Never knowing top from bottom
when their world stays upside-down" speaks volumes in its gentle whisper.
Your opening and conclusion is in perfect symmetry of thought. A stunning poem and presentation.

hugs and blessings,
Sandi

Posted 1 Year Ago

Hello Donna,
This is an awesome metaphoric poem you have written here.I think a lot of people may feel this way at some point in their life when it is filled with chaos for whatever reason.Maybe this undying wind is God's will letting the dandelion see all of its choices before allowing it to plant its seed and live long and prosperous.
Thank you for sharing this thought provoking poem with us and keep up the great work.
Don

Posted 1 Year Ago

i love it and the background and music are a nice touch.

Posted 1 Year Ago