Anger Of My Understanding

Was badly offended by my mom and was so disappointing,,everyone stood trying to advice but all they said was not indispensable to the anger of my understanding....

My conscience in anger
with the owner of thine womb
thy lips of thy mother
makes my heart bother

So insulting is her word
against my odd
unmindful to my hurts
unreasoning to the situation
that i plead of

My heart almost bursting
like a volcano ascending
around me concerned words suggesting
my grief stood rejecting

Brokenness solutions striking
but my anger breaks the brokenness
speaking with a lions throat
exemplifying my thoughts
protesting imaginations
drops on my mind field
Like missile and bombs


                              Oh MOM WHY?   

Reviews

[Havthoveen]

we all feel the same pains .....nice poem

[nono]

True something I think we all can relate to. Parents sometiems just don't relize the pain they cause us. I just learn to brush it off and write about it and I get something good! LMAO! Nicely done!

[deeps]

Whoa! This is pact with strong emotion.
Very well expressed write.

[lil be me]

this is deep. I like it