A long lasting impression

Take what you want from this.

Your feelings of desire

Are something that I wish to acquire

A feeling so true

Something that could only be shared by two

The only exception

Is the remorse of  rejection

A fearful loss

Of something that was never there

You’re left with no one to care

The helplessness of being blind in the dark

A desperate wanderer 

Without a guide

That has been washed ashore by the tide

Stranded, alone

So far from home

It’s so plain to see

That you will always be

A hopeless desire

I will never acquire

Reviews

[Brianna Woodward]

'a hopeless desire, i will never acquire' - a wonderful phrase
the only thing would be that somewhere in the middle the rhyming seems to go a little awry, but overall, me myself not being a huge fan completely rhyming poems, it was very good

[humahum]

i enjoyed this write