Chapter One: Austin Jones

Chapter One: Austin Jones

Austin.

Austin Jones.

19 years old.

Black hair. Blue eyes. White skin. Had Muscles.

Lives with his dad, Tom. Lives in Tucson, Arizona.

Austin is a depressed young adult.

Hates living with his dad. Hates his friends. Hates life itself.

He wants to end it all.

He has his plan to end it all.

19 sleeping pills.

He knew he needed to do it before the 19^th of April, when he was going to be forcefully moved to San Francisco, California.

Austin’s story should end on the 19^th but sometimes the world changes plans.

Reviews

[patricia]

I'm intrigued and reading on...

[Bellamorte]

I like that you leave it on a bit of a cliffhanger. I wanna know what happens next now.

Good character build. My writing coach would say to use this as a bio and build the info you have here into a paragraph. that way you could give a little more detail or even draw out the suspense of who he is is more. Great start imo.