less than a memory; more than a thought.

less than a memory

more than a thought

I knew you before

I don't want to know you now

Your just a photo in a box

In the top of my closet

collecting little bits of dust

I don't try to blow  it off

I let you slowly fade away

my mind nedds a rest

and my heart is praying for a coma

You say baby we are mean't to be

we

us

you, me

me, you, her

her, and, you, and me.

"us" is not anymore

evermore

nevermore

"me" is all i'm acountable for

so fade into the background

cause your

less than a memory

more than a thought.

Author's Note

Not my best work. Just something i had to get out. :)

Reviews

[HeadStrong]

Wow, i think this is in my top 3 favorties of your writing, great job, :))))

[topsyturvy]

Well you might not find it to be your best work, but I can honestly say you've done a great job in articulating the need you have to let it go.:) It was a perfect write, well, that is in my opinion, or maybe I'm biased since I have felt that way and well, did nothing about it, but I am getting it, so I guess... It still counts right? Anyway enough this is about you and not me. I loved this piece, even the flow was nicely done, so there, great job.:)

[chloe cruz]

I agree completely with NewBorn... I loved this! The images went through my head... and made me think back, relate. Relate so much to this it hurt. Anyway, really beautiful poem. :] Wonderful write.

Chloe.

[Bertie]

Not your best work ? I love this !
Don't know why, just has a really nice flow, there's no elaborate metaphors which works when your talking about something like this, no bullshit lol

Keep it up :)

[Sketch]

wow great job, it strongly gets the point across good for you. Sounds like you have a strong mind and are a strong willed person. You definitely did a good job in setting up the mood. =)

[mystic soul]

if this is not your best then i must say your best work must be an epic....... i really enjoyed this one....especially following lines
we
us
you, me
me, you, her
her, and, you, and me.
"us" is not anymore .................. these lines touched my heart.....