Lies

Lies lies lies,

There's flies in your lies-trap Helen,

OR...

LIES LIES LIES

 There's lies in your flytrap.

 

Which ever way it goes,

no one really knows...

Then again, it's been said,

that there's lies in lies-traps...

Author's Note

Something two of my friends inspired :) Let me know as usual! :)
do NOT mean this pervertedly! Okay?! :p

Reviews

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

Hmmmmm this is a different piece haha, but great all the same. Took me a minute to get it fully but that's just me being slow so ya. :)

[Yina]

I'm so offended lol NOT!:) You're still not getting it right though! Tsk tsk! lol

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

This is a pretty fun poem.
No lie...

[sugar]

i liked it but u had some grammer mistakes but still it was very very good, simple

[Just Me]

This was very...... i don't know how to describe it. Either way it was good.

[Poe Redd]

XDDD It kind of made me laugh... just saying. Um, she lied? About what exactly, like messege me, thanks? Lol, i just think it's funny. So, naturally, it's totally fun to read. "Lies lies lies!" XD

[DontBlink158]

web of lies came to my mind.... i liked it, and i like to see writers base things off of real life... Good job!!

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. I read it many times. Lies do gain life and become bigger. Thank you for a poem to test a old man mind.
Coyote