Daggered

Blood oozing, friendship stabbed.
shock of betrayal, this can't be!
This' the hard life, cold and cruel.
As you can see,
           I've been Daggered. 

Author's Note

I've been having a fascination affair with daggers. Don't know why, but I wanted to write something bloody, and was related to daggers. No, I haven't lost a friend, as far as I know; it just ended this way. :0 Thank you for reading, and give me your honest opinion.

Reviews

[Winters Eve]

That is a great way of describing a broken friendship...i like how you went "all out" with the simple saying of stabbed in the back.

[Lively]

True meaning of being daggered!

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

once again a great piece.

[Poe Redd]

Wow... it's raaaaw. So raw it's still bleeding. lol. I love it!

[DontBlink158]

Wow i really loved it. Its a great poem!!!!

[Alicia Hirshey]

To be daggered sucks. You penned it well.

[Coyote Poetry]

To be daggered could be very painful. I enjoyed this short poem. No wasted words. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Yina]

oooo DAGGERED;) lol reminds me of Sunday:) Awesome write chica:):) Wish I had such talent.....:)

[Thea]

Short but really great...You did well here... :)))

[Science girl]

Interesting piece, but I like it. This can be a metaphor for a few things, I can think of at least. Nice job!