Lady Lullaby

The lady that sings away peace and sanity:DDD

She's searching

for a sanity to sing away

to sleep.

For her own peace of mind. 

She roams the worlds of dreams, thoughts, and hopes,

searching for peace

that she can steal.

To take as her own.

 

So this night when you close your eyes;

Beaware the beautful lullaby,

monsters are lurking about.

If you catch yourself singing a strange tune in your head,

and feel your room change form,

though your eyes are closed;

open them, to see

Lady Lullaby,

Stealing your sanity.

As she did mine.

 

This is what I hear and feel,

evry night before I sleep.

So say what you may,

the Lady will come to you.

Reviews

[Richard Anthony Goulart]

I like this. I like to read something that has a good bit of wiggle room to make it fit the way that I am feeling and that is what I like about this poem of yours.

[JRB]

very nicely put great write, stay with iy

[The Jay]

Tells a story in a wonderful way. Spectacular flow and expression.

[TC Dunn]

oh eerie… beautifully seductive… leading you down into a dark world. Such an interesting topic. Great job.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Wonderful imagination and lovely picture fantasy! thank you :)

[Becky Clancy]

Its sounds more like a song than a poem, I really like it ^_^b

[Thrinna Mae]

Dark...T'was very interesting to read.
Great work.
:)))

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting Lady you have create. A dream stealer and a stealer of hope. What would we have left? I like the tale in this poem. A very good ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

dark lullaby, nicely done! enjoyed this.