Pick up the phone

Pick up the phone

A Poem by goldenscar__

hello?
could you please pickup the phone ?
your daughter is vomiting
she has a fever
I think she's dying
I can't drive to the hospital
my leg is broken


hello again?
are you there?
I need your help
your daughter will be having a singing competition tomorrow at 7pm
she wants you to be there for her
I want you to be there
please?


hello? please pick up the phone
your daughter is getting married
she wants you to clothe her your mom's necklace
she is crying...
so do I


Hello? babe
I'm scared
I think I'm starting to have Alzahaimar
I can't remember where I did put your favorite book
I'm terrified

please don't be dead
please pick up the phone

© 2018 goldenscar__


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A powerful read about loss. Evoked feelings of sadness. Well written lines.

Chris

Posted 6 Months Ago


goldenscar__

6 Months Ago

Thank you.. glad you liked it
Wow that's so sad cause you're like wow what a jerk then you're like wow she's dead!


Posted 6 Months Ago


goldenscar__

6 Months Ago

thank you.. it's just sad
This is so true, heartbreaking at the end. Parents should be there always for their kids, even when it's a messy breakup between the adults. But the kids are always the ones who get hurt in the long-run.

Posted 6 Months Ago


goldenscar__

6 Months Ago

Love is the cure
Dawn

6 Months Ago

We need more love in this world.
goldenscar__

6 Months Ago

more and more
sad write,and i feel a true write,no parent should avoid their children

Posted 6 Months Ago


 wordman

6 Months Ago

yeah,i can imagine,sad situation,glad it wasn`t true for you
goldenscar__

6 Months Ago

thank you.. it can happen to any o us
 wordman

6 Months Ago

it can,and it does
gosh, a very sad write
such a sense of loss


Posted 6 Months Ago


goldenscar__

6 Months Ago

it hurts..
Ana Papaya

6 Months Ago

I imagine it does. I wish you better things ahead.
goldenscar__

6 Months Ago

Thank you for reading

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