Pick up the phone

hello?
could you please pickup the phone ?
your daughter is vomiting
she has a fever
I think she's dying
I can't drive to the hospital
my leg is broken


hello again?
are you there?
I need your help
your daughter will be having a singing competition tomorrow at 7pm
she wants you to be there for her
I want you to be there
please?


hello? please pick up the phone
your daughter is getting married
she wants you to clothe her your mom's necklace
she is crying...
so do I


Hello? babe
I'm scared
I think I'm starting to have Alzahaimar
I can't remember where I did put your favorite book
I'm terrified

please don't be dead
please pick up the phone

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

A powerful read about loss. Evoked feelings of sadness. Well written lines.

Chris

[goldenscar__]

Thank you.. glad you liked it

[Ghost writer]

Wow that's so sad cause you're like wow what a jerk then you're like wow she's dead!

[goldenscar__]

thank you.. it's just sad

[Onlyme]

This is so true, heartbreaking at the end. Parents should be there always for their kids, even when it's a messy breakup between the adults. But the kids are always the ones who get hurt in the long-run.

[goldenscar__]

That is so true.. unless the father is dead and the mother is not over him

[Onlyme]

exactly.......

[goldenscar__]

falling in love is scary indeed

[Onlyme]

Better to have loved, than to never have loved at all. At least you have expericed the emotions and bond of another soul.

[goldenscar__]

I agree.. love is the best experience you go through while you alive, it's just the fear of losing....

[Onlyme]

It will happen to us all thou sadly. But to love is wonderful.

[goldenscar__]

Love is the cure

[Onlyme]

We need more love in this world.

[goldenscar__]

more and more

[wordman]

sad write,and i feel a true write,no parent should avoid their children

[goldenscar__]

She was trying to reach her dead husband..

[wordman]

this is even sad,er

[goldenscar__]

very much...

[wordman]

is it true for you

[goldenscar__]

No, I got possessed for some time by a woman who had lost her husband in a car crash and she couldn't move on since then

[wordman]

yeah,i can imagine,sad situation,glad it wasn`t true for you

[goldenscar__]

thank you.. it can happen to any o us

[wordman]

it can,and it does

[Ana Papaya]

gosh, a very sad write
such a sense of loss

[goldenscar__]

it hurts..

[Ana Papaya]

I imagine it does. I wish you better things ahead.

[goldenscar__]

Thank you for reading