I Didn't Write This For You

I Didn't Write This For You

A Poem by Doreen
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See for yourself.

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I didn’t write this for you,

but for the lesson which taught me

trust is a fairytale of broken dreams

and empty words strung together

like beads, or pearls,

worn dull and chipped

choking out vitality and hope.

 

I didn’t write this for you

but for the myriad moments

that should have brought smiles,

crystalline laughter in tympanic bursts,

and lightness of heart

but, instead, brought heavy,

salted tears.

 

I didn’t write this for you,

but for the emptiness of soul

within my chest, lingering

in a cavernous abyss

dripping with acidic regret.

 

I didn’t write this

for you.


© 2012 Doreen


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Writing to make up for a future you wanted but couldn't get...tragic shame. :/ But your words should be able to mend even the weakest of hearts and make them strong again. Excellently penned :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Doreen

11 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by and reading, and for the kind review.
Sucks when someone you love doesn't get you. Keep writing for your own expression and we will all be better off.
Thanks for the well penned poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Doreen

11 Years Ago

Yup. It sure does. And thank you for reading and commenting. :)
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There is something about this that I REALLY enjoy. It is as if you are saying, no, this isn't about you, this is about what you did to me and who I wish you would have been. There is a bitterness to it that makes it realistic and relatable. Lovely work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Doreen

11 Years Ago

Thank you for visiting. I'm glad it came across the way it was intended. I appreciate your feedbac.. read more

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